Descriptive writing…

Here are some snippets of descriptive writing from our work on Charlie and the Chocolate Factory. We are looking forward to creating sentence spirals to add to our Chocotastic display.

Jamie
Slimy chocolate slithered down the rugged rocks.

Rhys
Popping out of the sticky marshmallow grass, were beautiful shiny lollipops.

How would you complete Lucy or Chloe’s sentence?

Lucy
As I walked into the wonderful, magical chocolate factory I gasped…

Chloe
As I danced gracefully through the doors of the chocolate room…

3 thoughts on “Descriptive writing…

  1. Chloe:
    As I danced gracefully through the magical doors of the breath taking chocolate room, I froze with delight with the wonderful sight!

    Lucy:
    As I strolled into the wonderful magical chocolate factory I gasped with amaze.

  2. Chloe : As I danced gracefully through the doors of the chocolate room I glared at the lovely chocolate. Willy Wonka just complained ” this is my favourite room of the whole factory.” I chose this because like the starter. Also I like that I used a adverb and a adjective. Georgina: you could keep liking lolly pops and it would keep going.

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